maan sadhai runcha kina
timilai hasauchu vanda
hares khayeko yo maan kina
timilai protsahan dinchu vanda


parkhi timilai base kina
timi aaudainou tha huda
aash timro gare kina
nirasanai jivanrupi satya huda


atyaudaina yo maan le kina
timro maya ma hoina vanda
aafani timi lagchou timi
paraya bhaisakyou tha huda

ruyeko man ley
hasaunu khojchau kina.
jharideu ashu paredeu
afnu man haluka.
kina khojchau dinu
arulai protsaahan
jodi deu toteko mutu
afailai garedeu nirman.

nirasa lai nai satya bhannuthanchau kina
dukheko ghau ma jhan nun thapchau kina
ekpatak hasera ta hera
tyasko maja chakhera ta hera.

audainin uni thaha bhayo malai
janinan unle maya ya ta jannu chahinan
aba ta bujedeu jewan mela ho
yaha thuprai saathi bhetinchan
eutai lai kurera haar khanchau??




p.s>>>>unknown_boy...... ramro lagyo u le lekheko soo maile pani jani najanee afnu bichar pokheko...kaha suna maaf:)

LOL.:)

Dubai lai Clap clap clap.

Ramro. Ramro.

IndisGuise:)

Ho sathi, taha huncha uni aaundinan bhanera,
tara pani, yo pagal man
mandaina, uni aune asa ma!

Kurda Kurda jindagi nai sidhincha jasto cha,
tyi pani asa ko tyandro,
bandhi rakcha sabailai,
mayako kachha dhago ma,
jaba ki dhago tute ko barsau bhaysakecha!

Jindagi bitau, usko yaad ma.
ke taha , 12 barsa ma dhunga pani palauncha bhanchan!
Mero din ta aayena,tyi pani ajhai kurdai chu,
tara ke taha, timro r hamro din phirchan ki!

rulna ji ko ni poem atinai ramro bhayo keep it up hai..

unknowboy n ruina dubaiko feeling ramro chha. Ani ruIna nanu, kahile dekhi yasto lekhna lagya- parasko yad aayer ho kya ho? Achel ta timilai dekhna pani garho chha kata busy.Anyway, mero pani sano swikarnus hai! gajal jasto touch dine prayas gareko chhu.

एकलास जीवनमा साथ कसैको चहिन्छ नै
मात्र तिमीनै चाहिन्छ यस्तो कुनै चाह छैन।

खहरेको भेल हो जिन्दगी किनारमा हुत्याईदिन्छ
तिम्रो साथ उस्ले पायो त के भो कुनै डाह छैन।

दुख्ने घाउ कहिले कोट्याउछु, सुम्सुम्याउछु
जलोस, दुखिरहोस मन अलिकति आह छैन्।

झरेको पात भयो जीवन हावासँगै बहिदिने
बदलिदो मौसम छ, मायामा घृणा कहाँ छैन।

एकलास जीवनमा साथ कसैको चहिन्छ नै
मात्र तिमीनै चाहिन्छ यस्तो कुनै चाह छैन।

-सुरेन
२४/०१/२०६२
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Jane gaai hali
Basera ma rune Kina?
Maya uslai chaina mero vhani
Usko maya malai pani chaina ?
Ma ta Usko maya Ko pachi thiyea
Usko sharir Ko paachi vhaagne Kina?
Ho yaad aauna swabhavik Ho usko
Tara yaad ma dubera basne kina
Aru pani ta dukkha chan jivan ma
Uskai naam liyera rune kina?

maile pani jane na jani yeso deyeako ni........
Hope U like it :-)

ty ty:)

surendras jee;
hehe khasai busy ta chuina ali ali matrai ho:)
paras ko yaad ayeko hoina uslai birseko yaad ayeko:D
hajur ley hernu nai hundaina raicha ma yahi chu taa najikai luki mari kheldai chu thread haru ma:D

nice poem :)

ruIna,
Ho ra! achel teti dekhe jasto lagen ra sodhya kya. Ani pheri ma nai teti regular chhaina, pheri timilai dekhne ta kurai bhayen. tyas arthma bhanou na, bolne bahana nai bho. thanks for the comment about poem. I have a small concern/message for you where you have replied to my post in just a while ago.May be u wanna check back.

cheers,
Suren
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malai sabai kabi ra sabai kabita uttikai mann parne bhaekale eha pani hajir janaye

You people are good.. nice poems.. wording touched my heart... heheh.. like... i know you wont come but i sit here waiting for you jastai.. nice nice.. i wish i k new how to write em too!!:(

Rock a bye baby on the tree top,
When the wind blows the cradle will rock,
When the bough breaks the cradle will fall,
And down will come baby, cradle and all. :d

lol sis.... long time no see.. I was missing you.. so glad to see you... heheh :D nice poem I liked it!! hahahaha.... i use to sing this a lot before!!

hey roseee, nice to c ya back in action.

Wat bout ?

Humpty dumpty sat on a wall
humpty dumpty had a great fall..........................

I dunno after that.

u guys figure it out hai.

I just came here to say hi to matrixrose and ladies.


harkeDai