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Dada_Giri
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Posted on 03-26-05 7:20
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सन्जुको याद आयो सन्जु काव्य चतुर्थ भाग "ओ हो! कस्तो जाडो यार! पुतली बजारमा त!" खलाँसी पनि लुग लुग काँप्दै थियो र भन्यो "ल! प्रगती नगर! प्रगति नगर!" हामी गाडिबाट झरेम् र यसो कोठा खोज्नतिर लागेम्। पहिला पुग्ने ठाउँ भन्या उही त हो नि लोकराज काकाको डेरामा पुगियो। बाग्लुगंबाट कुष्मा, पोखरा हुँदै काका फेरि पुतली बजार हुनुहुन्थ्यो, "घुम्दै फिर्दै रुम्जाटार" भन्या जस्तो। सन्जु पनि काकाको पुच्छर त हो नि बरा अहिले पुतली बजारै थिई। "कहाँ बस्ने, कहाँ ट्युसन पढ्ने सबै कुरा काकालाई सोध्नु! तेइ लोकेले ठेगान लगाम्छ!"" भनेर बुवाले पनि सल्लाह दिनू भाऽ हुनाले पहिला हामी काकाको कोठाँ पुगियो। *** *** *** पुग्दाखेरि सन्जुले यसो गेस पेपर सेस पेपर हेर्दै थिई। हामेरुलाई देखी। हामेरु भन्नाले म र आत्माराम नि अब अरु को नै हुन्थयो र? अनि सन्जुले यसो चिया सिया बनाई दुधै नहालेको कालो चिया टक्र्याई हामेरुलाई। आत्मारामले भनिहाल्यो, "ह्या यस्तो कालो चिया दिन्छे।" "अब म ह्याँ पुतली बजारमा गाई पालेर बस्दै छु कि क्या हो, खाऊ खुरुक्क कालो चिया।" मलाई नि कालो चिया त मनै नपर्ने नि फेरि, तैपनि नकाराइकन एक सुर्पी तानेँ। मनै परेन, तीतो लाग्यो। छातीमा हात राखेर नढाँटी भन्दिम् भने मिठै थिएन के। *** *** *** हाम्ले स्कुले जिवनका गफगाफ गर्दै थिएम्, यत्तिकैमा काका नि आइपुग्नु भो। काकालाई ढोग्न त परिहाल्यो त्यसैमाथि यसपाली त SLC परिक्षा नसकिने बेलासम्म के के आइलाग्ने हो काकासित धेरै सहयोग पनि लिनु छ, ढोगेम् २टैले गोडाँ। काकाले ब्यगं हान्नु भो, "हैन, आज कताबाट भगवान आए?" । "काका अब हाम्रो ठेगान लागाइदिन पर्यो, कोठा सोठा नि खोज्दिनुस् अब हाम्लाई थाऽ छैन।" आत्मारामले गुनासो पोख्यो। "ए! तेसको फिक्री नलेऊ तिमेरु, मैले ऊ पल्लो घरको गुरुकहाँ कुरा गरिसक्या छु। २टा केटा आउँछन् , तिनलाई तपाईँकहाँ राख्नी हो" भनीसक्या छु। "पोहोर जिवन र खेमु बस्या कोठा हो। तिमेरु त्यहाँ भएसी यो सन्जुलाई नि सजिलो हुन्छ सँगै पढ्न नजान्या कुरा आदान प्रदान गर्न नि हुनी।" हाम्लाई त के खोज्छस् काना आँखा भन्या जस्तो भो। २टै अर्थमा।
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Nirman
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Posted on 04-06-05 4:38
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हाहाहाहाहाहाहा........अति राम्रो लाग्यो दादाको कथा.......टिपिकल दादा स्टाइलमा...दादालाइ ट्राजेडी किङ्ग नै बनाईदिम जस्तो लाग्यो हो......आगामि दिनमा अरु नि पढ्न पाम् मेरो शुभकामना उहि, निर्माण
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Dada_Giri
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Posted on 04-06-05 10:23
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?????? ? ?? ????? ??? ????? ????? ???? ??? ??? SLC ??? ??? ???? ???? ?? ????? ???? ??? ??? ???????? ? ??? ??????? ???, ???????? ??? ????? ???????? ???????, ??????? ??? ?????? ?????? ?????, ?????? ???? SLC ??? ?? ???? ??????? ????? ??????? ???? ???????? ???? ??? ??? ??? ??? ?? ? ??? ???! ??????? ????? ???? ????? ??????? ???? ?? ? ?????? ??? ???? ?? ?????? ????? ???? ? ???? ????? ????? ???? ?????? ?????? ? ??? ?? ???? ???? ?????? ???? ??? ??? ?? ???, ?? ?????? ? ?? ... ... ...
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Dada_Giri
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Posted on 04-06-05 10:50
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I wonder why there is Font Problem. After SLC result being published, I came to Thamel, Atmaram went to Batase Danda & Sanju again with her dad. We never met in a group of three, after that. That's why this Thread came here as a memory.
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Deep
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Posted on 04-06-05 10:53
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O dada som, bagrelti prasnabachak chinha chherera hindini..... khoi katha ko arko adhyaya? khali sanju sanju bhanya chha ...ki mari janu ki gari khanu...khali Atmebro ko man aago dankako chha hamkeko chha..... la ta ma yaha paleti marera basi sake...dadabro aaula ra katha paskela bhanera...bro ta jhyamta bajaudai bepatta?
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harkedai
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Posted on 04-06-05 10:54
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?????? ???? ????????...??????? ???????? ????? ?? ??????? >>>>>>>>>>>>>> Ekdam huncha. dada bro lai tragedy king nai banaunu parla jasto cha. Dada bro, kati asafal yaar ? Tyo japan ko po ho kyara ho, ek patak safalta ko gatha sunna paako. Lau na, tesailai ali safal banauna mildaina. Aba arko bhaag ma chai kehi garnu paryo hai. Babbalai bho ni bhanya ? Nice one broda. Waiting for some more.
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Deep
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Posted on 04-06-05 10:59
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Dada som le kasto gati chhadera katha sakeko...dhat! bro yo ta lasta harne gafadi netako chunab prachar ma hinya jasto bho...
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Dada_Giri
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Posted on 04-06-05 11:07
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1. All the names used here are real names. Sanju. Lok Raj Kaka, Atmaram, Govinda , Chyake, Ambika, Guru, (except Dada_Giri). 2. Story was based in the reality. Except few jokes and gaffs... 3. All the names of the palces are in real. Ani jabarjasti garna paainchha arkaki chhorilai? Japan Amrika jasto ho ra kakako chhorilai chhuna paaune, bihe garnu agaadi?
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Deep
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Posted on 04-06-05 11:15
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"Ani jabarjasti garna paainchha arkaki chhorilai? Japan Amrika jasto ho ra kakako chhorilai chhuna paaune, bihe garnu agaadi?" Ani ke ko aashma aaushadi pasal tira rati hudi battya ta? Anyway, dada som, enjoyed reading your piece. In fact, I am more into Nepali prastuti of yours than the content itself. However, I also would have enjoyed the story more if you had honor the characters (after leading the characters through many episodes)-especially lead ones-a dignified closure. That's all. Hope to read more from you.
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harkedai
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Posted on 04-06-05 11:20
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Ani napaaune kura tetikai sochidine ta bro. Garna napaaune kura soochnu pani ta bhayena ni. La sochna ta sochya, ajha hami lai pani bhanera, kautuhalta jagaidine ani paudaina bhanidine, la hai bhayena broda yesto ta. Yesh ma chai niyemapatti, kya. (table thataudai) re kya. Katha ko ending bhako ho broda. Hoina ni ? Lau lau, testo kura soochnu hunna recha ? Malai thah thiyena kya. Kyarnu, aafu ta didi bahini nabhako maanche k tha. Duuuuuuuuuuuuur duuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuur tak kohi nahi hai. Kya kare birader ? La hai ta bro. will be waiting for more, kya.
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Shikari
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Posted on 04-06-05 12:16
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hyatt terika........ jhan aba chai dadale kai garne bhaya lau bhaneko tessai gayo mauka haat bata . tet
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Dada Giri
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Posted on 04-06-05 5:04
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Deep Bro! Thanks for the valuable comments. (Aghi raati uthyaa thiye k pani khana. Bro pani pani khanai uthya ho ki Atme ka jhain chiyo garna ho... re kya!) Harku & Shikari bros, Thank you very much. Aru aru pachhi paskine chhu abashya.
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Posted on 04-06-05 6:53
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Dadagiri, gajjab ko lagyo ni malai ta.... nice story....BUT if you didnot have any intentions....or whatever, why did you buy the pale dai from that aausadi pasal? Yesto duijibre garna ta bhayena ni...Ki opportunity dances with those already on the dance floor bhanera tayaar bayeko ho?? Anyway, I enjoyed reading this...Expecting some more to come in the future. BTW, Where are you in Japan.....??
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forget-me-not
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Posted on 04-06-05 6:58
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One more question Dada Giri, where in Syangja? You seem to be close from Ridi or Ramdi??
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Dada Giri
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Posted on 04-06-05 7:13
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>Yesto duijibre garna ta bhayena ni...Ki opportunity dances with those already on the dance floor bhanera tayaar bayeko ho?? Thanks bro! Kasto kura nabujhya? Pakkai pani Jammai hernu bho hola. Kathaako Dada Girile ta Garna khojeko ni bara nasakeko... Lekhak Dada_Girile Safal bhayeko ending garna pani sakthyo tara ... ... ... Thanks bro, for the commetns. *** *** *** Shyangja Jugletira ho. Kathaama sappai chha. (Japan ma Tokyo ho. Kathaama chhaina.)
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Posted on 04-06-05 11:07
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Dada_Giri bro le tyo aushadhi pasal ma kineko pale dai lai pachi balloon banayera woodaye jasto chha............ Ani arko kura, katha ta tesai po tungiyechha, Dada_giri bro le na afu le himmat garyo, na ta aate lai ni chance diyo,.........naam chahi dada_giri re...........manchhe chai huti_ hara..........:)
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Dada Giri
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Posted on 04-06-05 11:21
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Sahrai bhannubho sathiharule, Ma 2/4 adhyaa thapchhu hai. Mauka mildakheri.
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Dada Giri
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Posted on 04-06-05 11:34
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Pls visit this while waiting for the rest. ओमियागे
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kalo_bhale
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Posted on 04-06-05 11:35
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La La dadagiri ji jaos jaos.............Huti hara taal le hoina ni...aba chai pakka dadagiri nai dekhai dinu paryo, gaun ka ek duita chyake raate haru lai pitera sanju lai dekhaunu paryo ni, ki sanju lai liyera pokhari tira poudi khelna gaye ni bho, nabhaye film silm dekhauna lage ni bho ni, aakhir Lokraj kaka le kehi bhanda rahena chhan kyare.....chewing gum jastai tankaye bhai halyo ni katha lai...............
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harkedai
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Posted on 04-07-05 9:10
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Nice link dada bro. Wow loved to read that as well. Thanx for sharing that link. Well waiting for some more of ur stories in sajha.
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Lambu dai
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Posted on 04-07-05 9:45
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Harke dai, Are you in CA right now? If you are in CA I think I know you. write me back...
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